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       She walks into the kitchen and sees Church sitting on the floor. "Hey Church, where's everyone?". Church's smurf-blue fur vibrates in hello. He gets up and shows her the way. They're walking towards the library when all of a sudden Jace pops out of one of the doors and scares her. "Gotchya!" He shouts. "Geez you scared me!", while she's trying to catch her breath. Gah! He's so breathtaking. She yearns to play with his golden hair. That luscious golden hair. My angel... Focus Clary! Then she realizes he's been talking to her... "Sorry you know I didn't mean to..." he was saying. "Clary? Earth to Clary? You okay there?" he was saying...he looked worried...like I was about to disappear or something. "Sorry I was just thinking..." Then- and I'm not making this up- he reached into his pocket and in his hand was a heart. "My heart for your thoughts?" he asked. But I didn't wanna tell him how I was thinking about him! Did I? It's been a secret for way too long...maybe I should just get it over with and tell him... "Jace..." I begin. But then I'm cut off as a gut-wretching shatter comes from downstairs. Jace starts running downstairs. "JACE!!!" I scream as loud as I can...but no one's here anymore...I run after him praying everything's okay, but in my heart I know something's terribly wrong. That's when he jumps at me...
Okay so yeah this is only Part One right now but I'll work on part two. (:
Ummm this is my first fanfic ever and It probably sucks but I'm hoping they'll get better over time...with maybe a little "fluff" hehe ;)
So yeah If you haven't read The Mortal Instruments series yet...go out and buy them...right now. If you have you are a cool cat and therefore know like I do that it's the best series to walk the face of the Earth. XD

Jace and Clary FOREVER! <3
Ps. Alex Pettyfer = Jace <3
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The-short-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
please, have you finished part two, maybe :D
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Ftmuzik Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
haha this does not suck! it's good for first fan-fic
thing. and im sure you definitely will get better as you
write more, it comes more naturally and quicker once you
have been writing for a while :)
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xoblueskiesluvrxo Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I actually don't really like to write more of a reader but I decided to try haha (:
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Ftmuzik Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
haha i'm more of a reader sometimes too xD
but writing something every once in a while aint
too bad eeiiva :)
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xoblueskiesluvrxo Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed. They're both fun XD
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downheartedhopes Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
I like thissss.
Even though idk what's really going on, since I didn't read the books.
Lol, but it's well written (:
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xoblueskiesluvrxo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Alex. Well you totally should read them they're amazing. (:
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LostandAlone12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009   Writer
The best books ever! if its okay with sara, you two can be a parabati and when i force bree to read them, we can be.
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xoblueskiesluvrxo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha cool with me. (:
Or Bree will choose me and wanna be my Parabati cuz I'm just that cool :P jkjk
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LostandAlone12 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009   Writer
you really are. :giggle: one of the many reasons i lylas
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